I had so much fun last weekend! Letting me tell you all about it…
(Previously posted on Austin Mystery Writers)
Last Saturday I attended a writer’s workshop at Book People, sponsored by Mystery People and the Austin chapter of Sisters In Crime. I honestly didn’t think I’d learn much new. But I was wrong. *Note- Between classes we had drawings for giveaways like books and tote bags!
It started with George Wier speaking about writing action scenes. He’s literally a pro at this. Just read any of his books. (www.billtravismysteries.com) It wasn’t about how to describe a blow-by-blow fistfight. It was more about how to add tension to a scene, how to make it move along. I don’t know about you, but I like bullet points. So I’ll share my notes in that manner.
- Before you can add action, you must put the reader in the moment. They won’t follow anything if they aren’t there. To accomplish this, describe the lay of the land and the surroundings.
- What are the results of the action? There should be consequences or the reader won’t care.
- The scene must have a beginning, middle, and end.
- Don’t describe things in terms of time. (aka- three hours later). Believe it or not, that doesn’t do anything for the reader. Time isn’t as tangible as distance. “They walked down a flight of stairs.” Is much easier for the reader to see and instantly understand.
- Perception is everything. Use all the senses. Have your characters be aware of their breathing, their surroundings, sounds, pain, everything.
The idea of writing about distance instead of time interests me. All of the things listed above make sense, but the idea that the reader can intuitively understand distance better than the concept of time is fascinating.
Scott Montgomery of Book People recommended the book, The Killer Inside Me by Jim Thompson. He said it was a good example of what Wier was talking about.
Cutting up between classes. Friend and author Billy Kring dropped by. He’s trying to distract me while George Wier looks on.
The guys behaving for Terry’s talk.
Next at the workshop was Terry Shames. She gave us many tips on how to writing compelling settings. And she should know. She does an excellent job of describing the Texas town where her Samuel Craddock series takes place. (www.terryshames.com) I came away with the concept of interior settings and exterior settings. No, not what a living room looks like, interior as in what’s going on inside a character. (More bullet points!)
- Treat your scenes as characters.
- The way to make your story interesting is to show how the interior setting (of characters) intersect with the exterior setting. How would someone from a Texas ranch interact with the people and setting of New York city? How would that same person act in their own hometown?
- The devil is in the details. Immerse the reader in the setting. You don’t have to do an information dump. (Please don’t.) But you can provide things like smells and sounds.
- If you aren’t familiar with a place, research it. Talk to people who know the place.
- Above all, know how your characters would interact with the setting. Someone who almost drowned would have a different reaction to falling in the water than someone who is an Olympic swimmer. So Know Your Characters!
- Every scene should try to have-
- Physical description of setting
- Physical description of characters
- Internal thinking
- Internal physical descriptions.
- A good rhythm of a scene would be: 2/1/2, 4/3/5, 6/2/1. Try it and see what happens.
Brent and James. Looking forward to reading their books.
After lunch we gathered for the last class about collaboration. Brent Douglass and James Dennis, two of the three authors who make up the persona of Miles Arecenaux (www.milesarceneaux.com), led a funny discussion on their journey of collaborative writing. They started their first book back in the days before email. Thank goodness the days of mailing a manuscript back and forth are gone. Thank you email! So what are their tips?
- Don’t be afraid to be honest with each other. Actually, they said to be brutally honest. Treat each other like siblings.
- Play up to your partners’ strengths. You are different people with different experiences. You that to your advantage.
- Work to maintain “one voice” for your book. It will get easier with practice but it will also take many edits to achieve this.
- Defer to people with experience. (Again, take advantage of your partner’s strengths.)
- It helps to build accountability. If you know that you’re expected to get your part done by a certain time and the others are counting on you, you better do it.
- Broadcast gratitude. Not only show gratitude to your partners, show gratitude to other writers.
(Collaborating sounds interesting. I think I’d like to take a stab at that just for fun.)
The last event was a panel discussion that was very informal. It was about publishing, marketing, and networking. Honestly, I was so caught up in listening, I forgot to take notes! All the speakers were charming, personable, and informative. It was worth every moment that I was there.
Gale Albright helped put it all together and did the raffle.
George answering questions between classes.
Terry and Scott
I’d like to say thank you to Book People and Scott Montgomery of Mystery People for hosting us!
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Mystery People is celebrating their 5th anniversary at Book People!
Saturday, November 7th at 3PM
Join us on our third floor as we celebrate five years of MysteryPeople with cake, champagne, mystery trivia, give aways and a panel discussion about the future of crime fiction. We’ll also unveil the MysteryPeople 100, a list of the top 100 must-read mystery and crime fiction picks, compiled from the recommendations of some of our favorite authors writing today. Happy birthday, MysteryPeople!
Our Life in Crime:
Authors, Booksellers and a Critic on the Novels That Define the Genre and the Future of Mystery/Crime Fiction Reading
Join Crime Fiction Coordinator Scott Montgomery, MysteryPeople maven Molly Odintz, and some of Austin’s crime fiction writers for a discussion of where crime fiction’s been and where it’s going.
Cake & Champagne!
Stick around after the conversation to help us pop a few corks and cut the MysteryPeople birthday cake!
Mystery Trivia & Book Give Aways!
While you’re enjoying a bit of cake and champagne, we’ll toss out trivia questions drawn from books, authors and the mystery/crime fiction genre at large. Winners will receive free books!
Behold, The MysteryPeople 100!
It’s time for the big reveal! We’ve canvased some of the top mystery/crime fiction authors writing today for their must-read, top genre picks of all time. We’ve compiled their submissions to create the MysteryPeople 100, a definitive list of the top 100 mystery/crime fiction novels of all time (in no particular order). Check out our display in-store and snag a copy of the list.
Thank you, Austin, for five wonderful years of great crime fiction reading. Here’s to the next five years of MysteryPeople! Cheers!
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Lots of things have been happening!
1. I now have a complete draft of my novel, Gilt Ridden. No, it’s not ready to send to an agent or publisher. It’s a draft. It’s now a complete story with a beginning, a middle, and an end.
A few years ago I promised myself that I could buy some crazy boots when I had a complete draft. If I’m a Texas author, I’ve got to look the part. Right? So the day after I typed “The End” I headed into town and found the perfect pair that had my favorite color of blue. (I tell you, that color is hard to find on boots) And I got a cowboy hat too. I’ve been looking everywhere for a hat I liked. I went to all the high-end, expensive places and couldn’t find one that didn’t look ridiculous. But I finally found one. Where? At the feed store, of course!
I’ve got crazy boots!
Howdy! Selfie at feed store.
2. A couple of other things have happened too. I participated at a book reading for our local chapter of Sisters in Crime. We read excerpts of our stories from Murder on Wheels.
Apparently I like my story.
Scott Montgomery, Kathy Waller, Gale Albright, and moi.
3. Then things began to ramp up for our big book launch at Book People. And let me tell you, just being a part of a book event at Book People was a dream come true. It’s the biggest independent book store in Texas and very prestigious. It’s also become my literary home away from home. I go there to write, meet with my critique group, and to meet authors. It’s become somewhat of a “holy” place since I saw Stephen King there. I even made him laugh. *Score!*
That’s King, I promise!
And I think the book launch was a success. I didn’t throw up from nervousness so that’s a bonus. We each discussed our stories and the process of putting together an anthology. Thank you, Book People and Mystery People! And I have to say thanks to Reavis Wortham, Scott Montgomery, Gale Albright, Kathy Waller, Earl Staggs, Laura Oles, and to all the people who showed up to listen. Thank you for making it a great night!
Describing danger on the high seas.
I'm signing books, y'all!
Serious literary talk. With Reavis, Scott, Gale, Kathy, Earl, and Laura.
Reavis, Scott, and some short chick.
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Scott Montgomery addressing the crowd
Austin Mystery Writers Logo
A spine-tingler of a gift!
Good book display
Good book display.
Reavis and Janice
Reavis and Janice.
More chairs? No problem
We need more chairs? No problem.
We're sitting in the back, taking notes, and trying to stay out of trouble.
I made Reavis laugh!
I made Reavis laugh!
Scott Montgomery speaking with Karen
Scott Montgomery speaking with Karen.
Reavis entertaining us.
Reavis entertaining us.
Karen giving great advice.
Karen MacInerney giving great advice.
Gale raffling off another item.
Gale raffling off another item.
Karen listening to Janice.
Karen listening to Janice.
I'm picking up character descriptions from the audience.
Elizabeth listening intently.
Creating great characters
Reavis is having too much fun.
Free notebooks 25 people!
This will be a short article, but I wanted to say a little something about our first writers’ workshop for Austin Mystery Writers.
First of all, I’d like to thank Book People and Mystery People for allowing us to use their space. And huge thanks to the writers Reavis Z. Wortham, Karen MacInerney, and Janice Hamrick for giving of their time to share their knowledge with us.
Lessons I learned:
1. Mysteries come in all shapes, sizes, and styles, but good writing is good writing.
2. Take out as many of the dialogue tags as you can. (he said, she said, he yelled, etc.) Try to change your description and action so you don’t have to use them. Reavis called it “trimming the fat”. Actually, I think he said, “It’s trimming the fat, y’all. You don’t need it.”
Words of wisdom from Reavis
3. Your story will drive the pace of your writing. Slower action will probably have longer chapters, faster action will have shorter chapters. The shorter chapters will make it move quickly.
4. It’s good to have a little humor to break up the heaviness of the drama. But don’t force the humor, some people just aren’t funny. (Surely I don’t have that problem. Right?)
5. Most writers probably write to work out something from their past. (I can see that.)
6. Karen said, “Read, read, read your genre!” You should know what is expected of your writing. A cozy mystery will have a different form and elements from a hard boiled mystery.
7. Your MC (Main Character) has to have a reason for solving the mystery. They can’t just “be there”. They have to have a stake in the outcome. (I knew this, but for some reason I’ve had trouble applying this to my current WIP, until Saturday. I had an “aha!” moment and fixed the problem.)
8. Janice talked about creating great characters. She had the audience do a simple, yet effective, writing exercise. She asked us to write down a description of a dotty old woman. The descriptions varied widely. She gave a scenario and told us to write the woman’s reaction. Boy! Even more variety than the first descriptions! She said that it goes to show that no two people write exactly the same way.
Jancie Hamrick teaching about how to make great characters.
9. The one thing Janice said that really stuck with me was about adding depth to a character. You can start with a stereotype, but add an unexpected twist to the character. For some reason that really stuck with me. So many of my favorite characters are flawed heroes. It works.
10. Janice also recommended you Google a character’s name before using it. Make sure you don’t accidentally give your hero the name of a famous killer.
There was so much more to the lectures, but these were the things that struck a chord with me. We had such a good time laughing and learning and giving away prizes! We are already talking of doing another on in the Spring.
P.S. I think my cookies helped make it fun too. 😉
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